by S.Mohanakrishnan
The year: 1981
I was transferred from Birpara
Tea Garden to Dumchipara Tea Garden where my Burra Saab allotted me the
‘modified’ bungalow. I was supposed to share this bungalow with a new trainee
who resigned and went away.
Every
now and then I was asked by the Office Superintendent whether the bungalow was
comfortable or not – he used to be the occupant before me. I was happy, and
enjoyed living alone, but then I kept hearing strange noises coming from the
false ceiling – as if something heavy had landed there. These sounds were attributed to the expansion
and contraction of the steel trusses.
Being a
factory assistant, I had all night duty and I used to sleep for a few hours during
the day.
As the
cold weather approached, leaf intake went down and the factory was run in the daytime.
Now I started sleeping in the bungalow at night. While I slept, I would feel as
if some fabric had touched me or slithered over me. It happened every night. I
started sleeping with the lights on, but still the thing continued.
One
evening, I had invited the Senior Assistant and his family to have tea with me.
Tea was laid out in the jalli kamra. It
must have been around 6:30 and we were going to start our evening drinks
session.
Just
then all of us clearly heard the sound of a child crying in the jhora outside –
the bungalow was on a mound with a jhora on either side. We thought that some
child from the line must have lost a goat in his care and was afraid to go back
home. I sent my cook to investigate. As he went down from the gate, the crying
stopped. ‘Koi nahin hai, Saab’, he shouted.
He
climbed back up the slope and the crying started again. I sent him back once
again. By this time all of us had come out to the bungalow boundary fencing.
This time he called another bungalow servant to go with him and they both
replied there was no one there. When the
crying started off for the third time the cook told me the sound was the noise
made by a ‘pret’ – a ghost. I simply shooed him away.
After
this, I realized that on the day of the regular chowkidar’s weekly off, no
substitute ever wanted to come to my bungalow. Whoever dared to come complained
the next morning that he had been jostled by somebody and his bedding had been
yanked out from under him.
All the
bungalows had two night chowkidars. One of my two was a ‘bowun’ (Nepali
Brahmin) and the other was a practicing Buddhist Lama who did ‘Lama-giri’ during the day. These two were the only ones who would come
to work on a regular basis.
In the
month of December, the service engineer of the company arrived to stay with me
while he overhauled the engines. As was the practice, we had a number of drinks
before going to sleep in our respective bedrooms. At around one o’clock in the
morning, he knocked on my door and told me there was something strange going
on.
He had
heard the sound of a water tap dripping into a bucket and woken up. He shifted
the bucket from under the tap and went back to sleep, but in ten minutes the
sound woke him up again. When this happened another couple of times, he decided
to wake me. I went along with him to see for myself. And I did – it happened again. After he
switched off the light in the bathroom, things were quiet.
The
service engineer went off on his rounds to other gardens and then back home to
Siliguri. When he returned, he brought his eight year old son to stay. The boy wanted
to ride his new bicycle in the wide open spaces of a tea garden.
We
returned to the bungalow from the factory that evening to find the boy sitting
in the drawing room, looking frightened. This is what he told us. He was playing in the guest room after he had
finished cycling. He saw a man walking across the room from one corner to the
other, and then disappearing into a cupboard! The man was dressed in khaki
shorts and shirt and wore a sola topi on his head. After this, the boy didn’t
stay alone in the bungalow, but kept close to his father.
The
next incident also took place during the engineer’s stay. This time he had come
without his son. We were eating our dinner when a very large cat entered the
room. It came from the garage, but the door leading to the garage was closed.
Even today, when I narrate this, my hair stands on end. It looked at me with
huge eyes. I picked up a knife from the
table and raised my hand to throw it, but my guest caught hold of my hand, and
said, ‘Na, Mohan! Eita onno jinish!’ (This is no cat! ) The cat – or whatever
it was - left the room the way it had come in.
I
shouted out to my chowkidars, but they stayed away. Later they told me, ‘Yo toh ho, Sir, yo daily
aunccha’ (This is the spirit that comes every day and troubles us).
I had
not mentioned any of these incidents to anyone else at the time, because I was
not scared.
A few
months later: The chowkidar woke me up at four o’clock one morning – without a
cup of tea. He said the kettle was missing. The previous night, I had placed
the kettle on top of the ‘Bajaj’ heater/oven myself. I had gone into the
kitchen after dinner. Burra Memsaab had sent a bowl of pudding, and after I had
eaten, I wanted to make sure the chowkidars didn’t help themselves and finish
the rest of it. After telling them to put the bowl in the fridge, I saw the
kettle on a shelf, and placed it on the heater.
I
blasted the chowkidar and asked him if he’d taken the kettle outside – for some
other purpose. He swore that he had not
touched it. How could he, it wasn’t there at all! We looked for it everywhere –
then, from the kitchen window, we saw it – it was in the middle of the lawn.
The chowkidar brought it inside: it was covered in dew.
This
was also forgotten after a few days.
The
noises that came from the ceiling continued.
The new
season started, and my night duties with it. One night, I came back early from
the factory. Manufacture finished around one o’clock, so at two thirty or so, I
was at the bungalow gate on my motorcycle.
I saw a
wizened old man standing there. He was dressed in Khaki shorts, khaki shirt and
a sola topi. I lost my cool and shouted at him, and asked him what he was doing
there at that time of the night. He replied that he was just roaming around.
Meanwhile I shouted for the chowkidars, who were looking out of the window – I
could see their faces, but they wouldn’t come out.
There
was a labour line behind the bungalow, on the other side of the jhora. People
started shouting from there, asking me not to talk but to go inside at once. I
told the old guy to get out anyway. He told me he was going, and he walked down
the slope to the culvert. From there he vanished.
By this
time both the chowkidars came out and when I scolded them, they said that this
was the ghost which came every night, and walked through closed doors and
windows – even in the form of a cat!
They both
said they used to pray all night to keep it away.
The
next morning, Nakul Singh baidaar who
lived behind the bungalow and Rarh Singh, a football player, came and told me
that I had been talking to the ghost of Man Bahadur Tamang. He used to be the
head sardar of the garden. He had died in the 1960s.
The
bungalow, it seems, had been built on a Tamang (Buddhist) burial /cremation
ground. The workers had repeatedly asked the then Burra Saab not to build a
bungalow at that site. It was built anyway.
I
continued to live in that bungalow till 1984, when I was transferred – back to
Birpara Tea Garden once again.
Editor's note:
Jhora – a small rivulet
Baidaar – one who keeps the workers’ attendance records
Head Sardar : Head Supervisor
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Wow, hair raising experiences. I like the way the writer's voice is indifferent to all the happenings he hears about, till he actually sees the predh. And the picture of that cat...Really looks like a cat that is a ghost. Terrifying.
ReplyDeleteA fantastic ghost story indeed....
ReplyDeleteGave me goosebumps..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful narration n can very well visualise ( having undergone a similar kinda experience as a Trainee in Margaret's Hope Tea Estate in Ghoom ) in 1996 ...
ReplyDeleteA hair-raising experience, very well narrated.
ReplyDeleteThis must be true. It happened with me and my wife at Boroi Tea Estate, Noth Bank, Assam.
ReplyDeleteGood storytelling
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
Too scary Mohan. And you continued living in that bungalow for quite some time...brave of you!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad we're reading all these stories after having come away from tea.
Very well written. Spooky!
ReplyDeleteSpooky! Trust Mohan to be so matter of fact😊loved reading it
ReplyDeleteHoly cow! You deserve a medal for your courage!
ReplyDeleteWould the ex Margaret's Hope trainee share his hair raising experience with us?
Ghostly.I thought ghosts were tales of my childhood!
ReplyDeleteWow - what an experience! I wonder if that bungalow still stands, and if the ghost still haunts it!
ReplyDeleteMohan , you write like you speak - direct and honest , no frills . All the more reason that what you writes leaves the reader gasping - and for more.
ReplyDeleteAll the while my hair was on end . I am not a believer but how can one be a disbeliever in the face of such experiences ...
A great story! Well narrated.
ReplyDeleteWOW 😮 And WOW again!! Absolutely loved the story. I could visualise every bit of it - the Mohan we know and love shines through in the narration! And such arrogance by the burra sahib!!
ReplyDeleteLoved this story as it is most convincing, without any dramatic embellishments. I’m a great believer in spirits and am sure they’re harmless. That you went through so many incidents, is amazing. Very few people are psychic enough to do so. I also enjoyed the short crisp sentences and easy flow of thoughts. Oz and hope there will be many more such pieces.
ReplyDeleteI could see the haunted bungalow and sense the errie feeling as if i had entered the bungalow myself. It gives one creeps , wanted a tag at the end ... to be continued .... a very well told tale... Mohan sir feed us more.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written, Mohan.I can picture the Dumchipara bungalow you are referring to.
ReplyDeleteThanks
ReplyDeleteGhost stories are in the realm of disbelief. It seems that ghosts are inconvenient but not frightful or harmful. The line between incovenience and fright is really personal courage. Mohan, amazing fearlessness. Hats of
ReplyDeleteGhost stories are in the realm of disbelief. It seems that ghosts are inconvenient but not frightful or harmful. The line between incovenience and fright is really personal courage. Mohan, amazing fearlessness. Hats of
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Never ever encountered any ghosts during my time in Tea. But heard many......
ReplyDeleteMohan, I loved the part about your conversation with the ghost and scolding him in Burrasab style
ReplyDeleteFantastic,thrilling,very convincing
ReplyDeleteSpectacular.
ReplyDeleteNicely narrated
ReplyDeleteI beieve.Wellwritten experience.Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteOld planters never die, they only fade away !!!
ReplyDeleteLoved reading your story uncle. Very well written! As a child I always parked myself in the kitchen during dinner prep, and insisted everyone told me ghost stories yet never saw one growing up.
ReplyDeleteLovely! Loved the story
ReplyDeleteSuch an interesting story, Mohan! I salute your courage. My father had a few uncanny experiences but didn't tell us much about them. He did mention one about the apparition of a tribal woman turning into a cat and then disappearing. Cats seem to have some natural connection with the uncanny, witches etc.
ReplyDeleteOhh really??? Now I gotta know I knew Rarh Singh he was my alike grandpa,football player.....
ReplyDeleteA spooky and well written story indeed, being a daughter of a planter and hearing similar stories from my father in his early years at Nagrifarm T.E, Darjeeling where he saw the spirit of a young, British lady standing a few paces away from him to how he and his friend saw a cloaked figure swooping right in front of their eyes along with the curtains being drawn apart own their to the opening of water taps in the bathroom at night, I could imagine and co-relate with every bit of the story. Few years ago, when my father was posted in Bagrakote T.E, I had experienced such eerieneness in the children's room of Bara kothi, not to mention the loud footsteps on the creaky wooden stairs at late night. Although I love to live in a tea garden's atmosphere I have experienced all this and knowing tea gardens from birth till now I do believe that there is something lurking in the shadows in places engulfed with darkness that is bound to give even the bravest the creeps and a shiver down the spine of anyone reading the tales....
ReplyDeleteEvery estate had some or the other story, My Dad used to tell us about them, he was in this estate also, and in Leesh river. the golden age of Teas.
ReplyDeleteDid you live in MS Flats RK Puram New Delhi If so you know me.
ReplyDeleteDear Bahu,
ReplyDeleteHi. This is the same Mohan who resided in 'P' block M.S. flats .
I presume you are the the same Bahu who resided in 'N' block.
Where are you these days.
Let us reunite. My mail is nahomahsirk@gmail.com
Best Wishes
I have relatives working in tea gardens and at least one of them has experienced such encounters.I was told that these keeps on happening particularly in the old tea gardens originally built and used by the Britishers.Indeed spine chilling experience.
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